THE DETAINEE'S OF THE STARS (writing a draft on paper)
- davidwingate1975
- Feb 1, 2024
- 3 min read
Updated: Nov 22, 2024
THE MARTIANS KILLING MANY OF THE DRAFTED NORTH AMERICAN SOLDIERS & MILITARY WHILE A GANG OF TWENTY-SOMETHING WOMEN i.e MIDDLE CLASS OR COLLEGE OR UNIVERSITY STUDENTS ALONG WITH GROUPS OF SIXTEEN & EIGHTEEN YEAR OLD YOUNG MEN HELD IN SHOCKINGLY LETHAL PRISON CAMP ( THE PRISONERS ESCAPE i.e WW2 LIKE GREAT ESCAPE ) & AN ELITE DIVISION OR SEAL TEAM & BRITAINS S A S TRY TO RESCUE THE YOUNG ADULTS INCLUDING VERY YOUTHFUL VERSION OF U S SECRET SERVICE & CONGRESSMAN SONS & DAUGHTERS i.e EPIC SCIENCE FICTION ACTION WAR STORY ( INCLUDING LOCAL VIRGINIA BATTLES ) INCLUDING CAPITOL HILL MEGA - PRISON CAMP THE MARTIAN'S BASED ON THE CREATURE FEATURE VERSION OF THE FOUR HORSEMEN OF THE APOCALYPSE & INDEPENDENCE DAY HARVESTER SPECIES
PROJECT
GROUP OF FOUR SPECIAL OPERATIONS SOLDIERS TRY TO RESCUE A GROUP OF V I Ps UNIVERSITY STUDENTS DAUGHTERS THREE OF THEM FROM MUTILATION i.e TRACKING THEIR WERE-ABOUT IN ARLINGTON
ALL OF THE SEVEN ARE CAPTURED & PUT IN CAPITOL HILL GHETTO & PRISON CAMP
DANIEL STEVENS, ROBERT PAGE, LEE DIAMOND, MARK COOPER PLUS GAIL WEISS, AMANDA TAYLOR, VICTORIA WARD & LOUISE ATKINS
i.e VICTORIA & LOUISE HAVE SUSPENSEFUL ENCOUNTER IN ARLINGTON PRIVATE SCHOOL WITH ROBERT & LEE KILLING TWO MARTIANS & DESTROYING TO TRIPODS
ONCE IN PRISON CAMP BETWEEN THE NATIONAL MALL & LINCOLN MERMORIAL BUT AFFECTEDLY THE WHOLE CAPITOL HILL
INCLUDING TRIPOD HUNTING TWO ESCAPED P O W s FROM THE PRISON CAMP HIDING IN WAR-DAMAGED PENTAGON
SOON AFTER DANIEL, ROBERT, LEE, & MARK INVOLVED & CHOSEN IN MARTIAN GLADIATORIAL GAMES i.e ALIEN BULL-FIGHTING AS GAIL & AMANDA ARE ATTACKED BY VAMPIRE LIKE MARTIANS IN A DANGEROUS LIAISON SEDUCTION & MURDER BOTH LASTING HALF & HOUR SET-PIECE
WHILE VICTORIA & LOUISE PLAN THE ESCAPE BEING GENIUSES
THAT NIGHT AFTER THE CHAOS OF ALIEN GLADIATOR / MATADOR EVENT DANIEL, ROBERT, LEE, & MARK FLEE WITH VICTORIA & LOUISE COMPLEX EVENT INVOLVING A FIGHTER JET & TRIPODS
THE NEXT DAY THE WASHINGTON, MARYLAND, & VIRGINIA RULING CLASSES ARE TOLD TO SEARCH FOR THE FUGITIVES IN ON THE RUN SET-PIECES AT THE u s NEWS & WORLD & VOX MEDIA HEADQUARTERS WITH THE PUBLIC RADIO CHASING THEM THROUGH I P CAMERA'S HI-TECH MOBILE PHONES
ENDING UP LEE BEING KILLED & DRAINED OF HIS BLOOD & FLUIDS AT THE ATLANTIC HEADQUARTERS
HOVER-CRAFTS & US MILITARY HUMVEE'S MASSIVE " THE MATRIX " LIKE HALF A HOUR SET-PIECES ON THE RUN & PUBLIC TRANSPORT i.e SPEED LIKE
WERE VICTORIA & LOUISE PURSUED BY TRI-PODS i.e SMALL FERRARI LIKE NOT THE MARTIAN MILITARY TRI-PODS THAT ARE BASICALLY WAR-DEATH MACHINES i.e LEG & ARM INJURIES CAUSE BY MARTIANS i.e LIKE JURASSIC PARK VELOCIRAPTORS " FEROCITY "
HEROES ROBERT, DANIEL, MARK, & THE INJURED VICTORIA & LOUISE HIDE OUT AT THE ABANDONED PENTAGON CHASED THROUGH BY MARTIANS & RULING CLASS BOUNTY HUNTERS i.e VILLAIN CALLED CALEB i.e IDF VERSION OF GAZA SUSPENSEFUL SET-PIECES & INCLUDING DOUBLE TROUBLE IN JAMESTOWN USING PUBLIC TRANSPORT i.E SUSPICIOUS CALEB & TEAM NO MARTIANS i.e LIKE THE FUGITIVE & IN LINE OF FIRE THEN ON TO SHOCKING FINALE SET AT THE VIRGINIA STATE CAPITOL i.E TOWN HALLS & GOVERNMENT BUILDINGS WERE HEROES BEAT CALEB & HIS TEAM WHO ARE KILLED BY MARTIANS LIKE VAMPIRES TEN-MINUTE BLOODTHIRSTY HORROR SCENES i.e WHILE A WESTERN AMERICAN BOMBING CAMPAIGN OF VIRGINIA STATE CAPITOL IN SET-PIECES REPLACING WATER ON JAMES CAMERON TITANIC WITH FIRE & NOXIOUS GAS
INCLUDING TRI-POD HI-JACKING SET-PIECE LIKE HEROES HOME INVASION HORROR SCENES & DUELS WITH RIVAL MORE ADVANCED MARTIAN TRI-PODS i.e LIKE WW2 TANK CONFLICT
ENDING WITH CREATURE FEATURE SCENES & HORROR IN VIRGINIA ASSEMBLY i.e DANIEL & ROBERT BRUTALLY MURDERED BY THE MARTIAN LEAVING THE RIPLEY LIKE FEMALE ACTION STAR CHARACTERS i.e VICTORIA & LOUISE DO NOT JUST DUEL THE BLOODTHIRSTY MARTIANS THE TRAITOR MARK i.e CALEBS COUSIN ALWAYS A RULING CLASS BOUNTY HUNTER " SUSPICION THROUGHOUT THE STORY " LIKE MISSION IMPOSSIBLE TWIST
WITH MARK HUNTING THE FEMALE HEROES & TWO CALIFORNIAN MALE MARINES AS THEIR TAKEN TO TRAVELLING, TEMPORARY & REPLACED C I A AGENTS HEADQUARTERS & NSA HEADQUARTERS IN TERMINATOR LIKE SIEGE WITH MARK & CALEBS EX-TEAM HUNTING MORE WORKING & MIDDLE CLASS BUT GENIUS FEMALE STUDENTS VICTORIA & LOUISE ENDING WITH A REBELLION WINNING AGAINST HUMAN VILLAINS TEAM i.e MARK & TWO LIKE MARTIAN GREEN BERET OR NAVY SEAL TEAM 6 TEST TRI-PODS i.e DEADLY LIKE THE RED OCTOBER ESCAPING INTO RICHMOND SOCIETY i.e BIT OF ROMANCE BETWEEN VICTORIA & MARK NOT KNOWING HE'S THE VILLAIN
THE END
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